Sensory Poem
I feel...The exitement and the hard, uncomfortable chair
I smell...The sweat, the hot dogs, and popcorn
I taste...The taste of victory
I see...The court and the last second shot
I hear...The squeaking shoes, the final buzzer,
and the entire stadium cheering like a booming thunderstorm
Willie Petersen
11-29-07
Period 2
3 comments:
oh wonderful metaphor baby brother. Thank you so much for sharing your very good poem. Did you get an "A"?
I also love the sound of squeaky shoes on a basketball court. It is one of my favorite sounds and gives me chills.
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